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Feeling hungry and can't afford food?
To the streets of DA then, to play on the simpathy of the common deviant and see if they'll give you food to watch you eat.

This stamp is a bit of fun depicting the lengths I'd go to get food. Thats right, I'd even eat.
Some people dance, others play music, but not I.
I 'Will Eat For FOOD'.







*free to use by anyone on DA. Anywhere else and it must be linked back to this page.

Critiques


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Vision:
You had a goal, a dream, and hope. And this stamp shows.

Originality:
I've been saying "Will Eat For Food" and writing it on fat things since I can ever remember. I'm giving you the few points I did only because I haven't said it in a few minutes.

Technique: The stamp has texture to break up the monotony. It would be more believable if the design looked like marker on cardboard.
The bottom edge of the stamp is a squiggly line over a white field. You thought you could get away with it, but you were wrong! I noticed! Papyrus font would make it look like the text was nibbled playfully. Do not use Papyrus font.

Impact: The impact of your statement resonated with me strongly, although two periods at the end show me that you are either a lazy period pusher or do not fully believe in yourself. Will you really eat for [more] food? A change in punctuation is all you need for me to believe, without a doubt, that the answer is yes.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
17 out of 17 deviants thought this was fair.

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